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   raindrop to puddle
"are we to become one?"

   solitude or union
"which is the greater freedom?"

           "hey you - in the puddle - do you see me?"

upon reflection
                  in the raindrop world

            "will i ever see myself my self?"

but words
          return
                in silence

                          the day has ended
                                          
                                      raindrop to puddle...
(  .  )  . (  .   )  .  (  . )
.  (  .  )  .  )  .  (  .  ).
)  .  (  .  )  .  )  .  (  .   
e  v  a  p  o  r  a  t  e  d....
©2008-2009 *Maurya2
:iconmaurya2:

Author's Comments

just a fun silly piece..

as was..
mr. muddle stepped into a puddle...

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:iconcellar-smoke:
Brilliant poem. =) The first and last stanzas are defenitely my favourites. Just amazing.
:iconmaurya2:
thanks breandan..it is supposed to be a fun poem..but with a meaning.:-)

--
~ everyone into the lifeboat, baby
...cause this ship is going down ~

my mantra ~ absenceoftouch ~
:iconbragadoshis:
Raindrops is hilarious, mad concise.
i appreciate the advice, you'll hear from me again.
:iconmaurya2:
cool mate..looking forward to getting to know you..and your work:-)

--
~ everyone into the lifeboat, baby
...cause this ship is going down ~

my mantra ~ absenceoftouch ~
:iconblue-roses-to-dust:
a good one indeed...:hug: are you gettin required raindrops your side :)

--
.. and without you is how i disappear
and live my life alone forever now... (MyChemicalRomance)

.. believe, believe in me, believe ... (SmashingPumpkins)

.. and into skies of enlightened-poets [link]
:iconmaurya2:
no!!..hey lou..listen to this joke i heard yesterday..
you know when you are australian when your wife goes into labour and when her water breaks you say.quick save it for the garden..hehehe

--
~ everyone into the lifeboat, baby
...cause this ship is going down ~

my mantra ~ absenceoftouch ~
:iconbone-white:
Interesting rhetorics. I am so agnostic and indecisive... then again, life came without instruction.
I really love the ending, ie. the characters and spacing...excellent correlation.
:iconcarlomarx:
Wow. I love this.
:iconet149:
hmm...
solitude or union
"which is the greater freedom?"...
good question... ;)
but...
I see you... :heart:

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