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comforts creature... by *Maurya2:iconMaurya2:



sometimes....                                                                                                          0;i lay the rubber corrugations
                                of a hot water bottle
                                         against my cheek..  
      and when
  the temperature is just right..        blood warm
                                                     rubber soft
         i slide it
                     d
     from              o          pretending..
        belly            w
                 to         n       it's your cheek
                 thighs                        or back
                                            or soft inner curves
                                  that
                                    i
                                  touch....


it's morning when you come..
                             .
                               to smooth with your warm palms

                                            my crumpled skin
        
              to bring me
                                comfort
©2007-2009 *Maurya2
:iconmaurya2:

Author's Comments

you can never have too many hot water bottles...to keep you warm on a winters night


..but a warm hand....\'mmm.\'.....
now that\'s what i want.

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:iconflamesyall:
I love this.

It actually made me feel warm.

A beautiful poem.

--
"...Whole body bling like 3PO..."


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:iconblue-roses-to-dust:
mmmms love hotwaterbottles...

--
.. and without you is how i disappear
and live my life alone forever now... (MyChemicalRomance)

.. believe, believe in me, believe ... (SmashingPumpkins)

.. and into skies of enlightened-poets [link]
:icontwistedmentality:
very interesting.

--
"Without anxiety and illness I should have been like a ship without a rudder."
Edvard Munch

"There is neither good nor ill but thinking makes it so" Shakespear
:iconmaurya2:
thanks..what makes me feel warm..is that you enjoyed ..and your 'little miss sophie'!..ta..

--
~ everyone into the lifeboat, baby
...cause this ship is going down ~

my mantra ~ absenceoftouch ~
:iconmaurya2:
growower..my creature..thanks for the "comfort"..

--
~ everyone into the lifeboat, baby
...cause this ship is going down ~

my mantra ~ absenceoftouch ~
:iconmaurya2:
Ta..mate..
you know..what i kmow..it does get cold down this way!!..plus..i like to pretend..*wink wink/nudgr nudge*



oh gotta a tell ya..one of me old mates used to play for NZ..i have his home ground..but forgot..i'll look it up!!!

trouble is..they call me MOM! aahHHHHH! i know he did play for the Warriors at some stage!

--
~ everyone into the lifeboat, baby
...cause this ship is going down ~

my mantra ~ absenceoftouch ~
:iconflamesyall:
Yeah, she makes a lot of people feel warm.

--
"...Whole body bling like 3PO..."


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:iconsuilenroc:
We like this work too. But We expected you to deliver a cold and distance disappointment at the expired no longer "hot" water bottle so cruelly encountered by warm feet (or other body parts) later in the early morn.

And the smell of rubber too! :D

--
In the kingdom of madness, a sane man, or one of his alternate personalities, bays at the moon.

Senior U.E.O. for the *Dark-Arts-Asylum
:iconmaurya2:
:thumbsup:

--
~ everyone into the lifeboat, baby
...cause this ship is going down ~

my mantra ~ absenceoftouch ~

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